Sunday, December 5, 2010

A tropical paradise

I would like to visit in a near future a Caribbean island to spend a very nice vacation and stop for a rest, escape from the routine, take the sun and go to the sea.

I want to be among palm trees I also want lie down in a sun lounger while I'm trying a caribean drink. It sounds good.
Besides, The Caribbean offers you a lot of other activities such as scuba diving, exploration tours in the tropical rain forest and also you can visit the legacy and rests of the native cultures. For that reason, we can invade us with this native spirit of the Caribbean islands, for feel his culture, to appreciate the diversity of the native flora and vegetation.

I've heard that the best Caribbean beaches are in Aruba, Antigua y Anguila in Barbados, and Virgin Islands in North America.

It exists other places like as Jamaica and Dominican Republic. I hope to be in one of these places soon. J.




3 comments:

  1. Good Christián,

    Do you mean, "A tropical paradise", "escape from the routine" and "spend a nice vacation"?

    And, "imagine you are among palm trees lying in the sun"?

    You should also say, "The Caribbean".

    Don´t forget, after a modal verb "can" + base form (offer) and finally, "I hope TO BE"

    There are too many mistakes. I suggest you use an English-English Dictionary like:

    www.merriam-webster.com to check your doubts and see if you are using words correctly.

    See you

    Paula

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  2. Paula, I've finished correcting my grammar.
    Can you check it again? pls =)
    Many thanks for your help,
    Regards,
    Christian.

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  3. HI CHRISTIÁN,

    EXCELLENT WORK, CONGRATULATIONS.

    I would only say, "There are other places" and not, "It exists..."

    Also, instead of "we can invade us...", say, "we can get in touch with or we can feel the Caribbean spirit..."

    Keep on working like this Christián.

    Best.

    Paula

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